tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6384453352520466337.post1478086997045103858..comments2024-03-18T06:20:28.550-07:00Comments on Begin in the Dark: Snippet Day!Naomi Clarkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16942943593211465740noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6384453352520466337.post-41601732860090512492014-11-20T07:07:14.544-08:002014-11-20T07:07:14.544-08:00Sorry for taking so long to read this dude! Its go...Sorry for taking so long to read this dude! Its good and I agree with Rose the last line is fantastic. I also really loved the nod to childhood memories that I think we all must have concerning the night, when the thrill of fear and mystery seemed to swell up beyond the unseen edges of your window frame. Awesome stuff as always :)kanachihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06533153519144476623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6384453352520466337.post-31679869621076290512014-11-06T01:26:48.449-08:002014-11-06T01:26:48.449-08:00:D Thank you!:D Thank you!Naomi Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16942943593211465740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6384453352520466337.post-4088882977581576922014-11-05T16:00:05.901-08:002014-11-05T16:00:05.901-08:00Love it! The last line is excellent. :) great tens...Love it! The last line is excellent. :) great tension too!L.D. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14335214009684281710noreply@blogger.com